Thursday, October 7, Day 22


Tonight’s Assignment

Make a comment 
on your partners' body paragraph for Essay 4. 
The final polished essay will be due on your blogs
on Monday night.

Read the paragraph very carefully, 
give it some careful thought, 
and then write three thoughtful sentences -- 
one offering a specific compliment 
and two offering specific suggestions.
Aim for around a total of 80 words
for the three sentences.